Narrative Change - Storyboard

 
Above is a picture of our new narrative, we felt we wanted to change the narrative as it wasn't going to be as effective as we had first thought, we have decided to write up a new storyboard just for our narrative as then we can go off this for the day we film this part, the drawings are very simple but we have also wrote the shot type and movement below it so we can see it and produce what we want very easily.