Media Pitch + Feedback

Bronwyn:
Good intro. I like the song title.
 
Song – I thought the music creation and lyrics (even though I couldn’t make out some of them) sounds good and definitely has good potential. Just saying.  
 
Ideas  –
Barn – it’s a really good narrative idea- I think it will work well, could work… depending on the pace of the editing, slow paced editing wouldn’t suit your genre –you probably would anyway
 
Engineering plant – not sure it would be as effective.
 
Warner’s Printing – relative and what I would expect, go for something a bit different to make it 

James Craig:
Presentation -

Good presentation

Understanding is good as they are talking about their own band
Original
 
Idea Opinions -

The ‘even feel’ is good

Like the narrative

Interesting ideas for effects

Prefer the Leicester locations as it seems more conventional and more interesting.

Possibly combine the first idea (as your storyline) and the second location as your performance scenes?

Track Opinions -

Interesting Track

Hard to understand the lyrics!

Matthew Bostock:

-          Interesting Track

-          Nice presentation style

-          Like idea 1 – utilises conventions of the genre well

-          Location 3 suits the genre well – would be ideal setting for the video

• From all of our peers feedback, I feel that they really enjoyed the sound of our first idea, however, feel that maybe using an abandoned building will alow it to be different and appealing.
• Everyone seemed to enjoy the song but find it hard to pick out the lyrics so a strong narrative seems the way to go.